All Alone

snowy-lanscape

On a snowy morning in Anchorage, Alaska I was walking through the forest to gather some pictures for a project at  school when I heard something move in the trees. Usually I’m not very curious but when I heard this I was hoping to see some kind of unique animal. I slowly glided through the snow hoping to be pleasantly surprised, when I stopped in my tracks. I couldn’t believe my eyes, there behind that tree was a person, I was paralyzed! I live very far away from civilization, actually I don’t even have neighbors, so you can imagine what I felt like. I quickly started running to where I thought was the direction of my house when that person started running after me. The person that was running after me caught up to me and tried stopping me but I tripped. When I got up there was a hand offering to help me up. He introduced himself as Zach and asked me my name.

“My name is Ellie” I replied. When I got up I brushed the snow off my clothes and started to ask Zach a question when he immediately cut me off.

“So I’m going to go now, I….uh need to get back home to my family.” Zach stuttered.

Well I guess I will never have a friend after all. Once I gathered all the things I dropped, I headed back home hoping some how someway I would see Zach again.

My image was found on: http://www.gettyimages.com/detail/video/snow-falling-on-country-road-stock-footage/473140309

Hey, here’s a twist I want you guys to finish my story!  Just go to the comments and give me an ending. Make sure you post your URL so I can check out some of your blogs! PLEASE make sure the ending is appropriate and don’t use ABRVS ( abbreviations ) Thanks for reading my post I hope you enjoyed it!

14 comments

  1. Hey i love your blog because its mysterious and someone can finish the story this is a good idea for a blog that I might use one time.

  2. Your blog is very interesting and I like the idea about being able to finish the story, just make sure you have the correct punctuation.

  3. Great post! This is a very interesting idea to be more interactive with your readers. I might use this type of post for my own blog!

  4. loved how you made me feel bad for Ellie, but, there was 2 words that were not used correctly, though when it should have been thought, and ah when it should have been uh. i know it doesn’t realty matter but it still bugged me. but i still wanted to know what would happen

    1. Thank you very much for telling me what my mistakes were, I really appreciate it. I fixed though into thought and ah into uh. Please if you see anything else tell me!! 🙂

  5. I love the perspective you told the story in, giving us Ellie’s thoughts while us telling us what was going on. The suspense you left was also a great touch. Is there any reason you chose Alaska as the setting? I’ve lived in Alaska so I’m just curious.

    1. I choose Alaska as my setting because I live in Ohio and I LOVE snow, and Ohio doesn’t have much of it. I’ve always wondered what it’s like in Alaska? The other reason I choose that, was because I’m doing a project in science where you have to choose a biome. My biome is the tundra and I choose to study Alaska for it!!

    1. I’m not sure what my next story will be, but I love writing so I will definitely have more stories. Do you have any ideas for a story because I would love to here them. Let me know if you think of anything!!

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