I’m stuck, no way out. My brother Caden and I should have never came out here. I was driving, we were going. There are millions of thoughts going through my mind, “Renee you mess everything up, you should have told your brother this was not safe running away from home like this.” Then our car broke down, what are we supposed to do there is no Triple A in the middle of no where. What if we can’t get out of this valley. We have little food and water, and a prisoner just escaped today. I will not let my brother get hurt. What if we die? I see a car coming down the road maybe it’s our parents, maybe it’s Triple A, or maybe it’s the escape prisoner, I really don’t know but soon I will find out.
I’ll leave the ending up to you, my viewers. This is the beginning of my story, unfortunately the characters trip has gone wrong. I would love for my viewers to finish my story, in the comments. Let’s see how many different endings I can get! I’ll pick my favorite and let you, my viewers know which one is my favorite. Remember to comment your URL so I can read some of your blogs, keep your comments appropriate,and no texting short cuts please. Thanks for reading and have fun commenting.
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I love how you made your post suspenseful.
I like your story its very suspenseful.
Thank you! I would really like to read some of your blog posts sometime!
Thank you so much! I would really enjoy reading some of your blogs sometime!
I liked how you made the story suspenseful it made me want to read more about it to see what was going to happen at the end. I really enjoyed and hope you do more.
Thank you so much! I really like how specific your comment is. I would love to read your blogs!
I really love this story. I love the way you wrote it. l love first person writing. You get to know everything the character is thinking. You get know them better as a character. Thinks again for story you’ve got me hooked
Thank you! Your comment is so specific! I would love to read your blogs sometime!
I really liked your story because of all of the things that you said in the beginning and how it cam in to play at the end.
Hey, thats pretty good! Come check out my post at http://mcdowellmedia.edublogs.org/2016/10/28/activity-5-blogging-challenge-2016/
Thank you! I will be sure to check out your blog sometime!
H i Emily! I really loved your story. It gave the reader something to think about and create their own ending to the story. It was great how you put so much detail into your story, just like in Power of the Pen! You should go check out my story at: http://mcdowellmedia.edublogs.org/2016/10/28/finish-my-story/
Thank you so much Kelsey! I will be sure to check out your blog post soon!
Hello, Emily! I really enjoyed how you kept me wanting to know more with your post. There were so many interesting details, which is great! Where did you get your inspiration for this post?
Thank you so much! I’m not really for sure where I got the inspiration to do this post. I kind of just went with what my mind said! I like coming up with stories so I guess that could be my inspiration!
Emily great job on making the story so suspenseful love the way you made it. You made me feel like I was acutely there with you.
Thank you so much! I would love to read some of your blog posts soon!
I like the use of words and the picture goes with the story well. What is a ‘Triple A’?
Thank you so much! A Triple A is an emergency road side assistants company, but it also does other things such as traveling.
I like your story so much! Was this a true story?
Why did they run away from home?
Thank you so much! No this is not a true story and they ran away from home because the felt like their parents were mistreating them.
I love your story! You made it so interesting with so many details! What inspired you to make a post about this?
Thank you so much! I didn’t really have an inspiration. I just made up a story because I love doing that!
I like your story and Also was that based of of a true story? I like the cliff hanger you left to! The picture goes great with the story.
Thank you! No this is not based off a true story.
Hello Emily! i liked your blog post, i like the way it made my feel like i was there as you were telling it. keep up the awesome blogs
Thank you! I would love to read some of your blog posts sometime!
I love how suspenseful your story is! Really keeps me on edge waiting to see whats going to happen. What was your inspiration when writing this?
Thank you so much! I did not really have an inspiration for this, I just really like to create stories!
I like your story, it is very interesting. Is this based on something that really happened.? Why did your characters choose to rub away from home?
Thank you! No this story is not based off a real thing that happened. The characters ran away from home because they felt like their parents were mistreating them.
i love your blog it has so many good posts but i love this one. keep up the good work
Thank you! I would like to read some of your blogs sometime!
The way you ended this story was very exciting and suspenseful. Is there any reason that you made a story like this? Have you ever experienced something like this before?
Thank you so much! The reason I made my story like this is because I love suspenseful books! No I have never experienced anything like this before.
Hello Emily,
My name is Rosane. I like your story, especially the end because we actually don’t know who is going to drive by. So much suspense!!! Will you please check out my story? http://rosaneisd20.edublogs.org/2016/10/24/blaire-story/\
Thanks,
Rosane.
Thank you so much! I will be sure to check out you story very soon!
Thank you so much! I will be sure to check out you story very soon! Thanks for leaving your URL so I can go directly to the story!
I liked this blog because you knew what the character was thinking and feeling.
Thank you! I would really like to read some of your blog posts sometime!
Was this a true story? Either way, it was a great story!
No this is not a true story. Thank you so much for the comment!
I loved this story! I really enjoyed the suspense through out!
Thank you so much! I would really enjoy reading some of your blog posts sometime!
Your story was great i can’t wait to see what others put as the ending of the story. Keep up the good work!
I can’t wait either! Thanks so much for the comment!
your story was really good ! it hooked me in after the first sentence. very suspenseful
Thank you so much! I would really enjoy reading some of your blogs!
This story had me hooked from the beginning, I’ve been lost before but never in that situation. This really left me hanging.
Thank you so much! I have never been lost like that before either! I Would love to read some of your blogs!
I love how suspenseful this was and left us with a cliff hanger. Also, letting us tell he rest of the story how we want it.
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Thank you! Also thanks for leaving your URL!
i like how it is very suspenseful and makes you want to think,also because it paints a picture in your head
Thank you! I would enjoy reading your blogs sometime!
I love how the story left me in suspense. I would love to know more about it. Cliff hangers make every story interesting.
Thank you! I agree cliffhangers to make the story more interesting!
I like how it is suspenseful and it paints a picture in your head.
Thank you!
Great story! Truly suspenseful and intriguing, maybe instead of having the readers finish the ending, let’s hear how the story ends in your perspective!
Thank you so much! Maybe I’ll type a second part to the story!
Great story! I like how you put the escaped prisoner in it to make it more suspenseful. Also when the car broke down, really nice story!
Thank you! I like how you made your comment so specific!
it was a good story i would love to hear more about the story
Thank you! I might type a second part to the story but I don’t know.
I like how the story had a picture that helped put a image in your head.
Thank you! I would like to read some of your posts sometime!
I like your cliff hanger. It makes me very curious about what happens next. Also keep up the good work.
Thank you! I’ll be sure to check out your blog sometime!
This is a very good story, you used very much detali, I like when she thought about the aproching car, knowing it could be the prisoner. Did you know ketucky is a big valley? Are you going to finish it yourself?
Thank you so much! I had no clue Kentucky was a big valley! I might write a part two to the story but I’m not for sure yet.
I really love this story. I love the way you wrote it. l love first person writing. You get to know everything the character is thinking. You get know them better as a character. Thinks again for story you’ve got me hooked
Thank you so much! I really love how you made your comment so specific!
Great story! It is so suspenseful and how you story ends in your perspective
Thank you! I might write a part two but it’s still up in the air.
it was a small enjoyable story. but i liked it.
Thanks!
I love the story! Very suspenseful!
Thank you so much! I would like to check out your blog sometime!
I loved how there was a lot of things that you don’t know that makes you want to keep reading! Good Job!
Thank you so much! I should check out your blog sometime!
I like how creative you were when you were writing this. Great job on the first personas well.
Thank you! I will check out your blog sometime!
I loved your story, It kept my eyes glued to it! My question to you is, what made you want to start writing?
Thank you so much! I’m not really for sure what made me start writing, but I usually write for my own enjoyment!
hey love your story it makes me want to know more and what will happen to them .keep blogging.
Thank you so much! I will check out your blog soon!
Dear Mcdowell,
I loved the story, it made me want to keep reading. Are you going to finish this story? I would love to read it.
Thank you so much! I might write a part two but it’s still up in the air!
i loved how you edited this and the layout of it.
Thank you so much! I will be sure to read some of your blogs soon!
this is an excellent story it was very entertaining
Thank you! I will read some of your blogs soon!
hey emily,
your store is great you are really creative.and i loved the lay out.it made me want to keep reading
Thank you! I will be sure to check out some of your upcoming posts!
I really like your story. i like how you get the reader involved in your posts. I used to do this for one of my classes last year. Each day we had to do something like this. How do you think the story should end?
Thank you! I’m not for sure how the story should end but I have a few ideas!
Hi Emily,
I enjoyed reading your story, it was a very good idea to let the viewers think of their own ending!
Good job!
From Summer, Australia.
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